The chart below shows the different types of accommodations chosen by the British when they were on holidays in 2013.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
British
people who have chosen accommodations on
their holidays in 2013. Overall
,most of the tourists were chosen for the hotel than other types
of accommodations in England
.
In the comparison between England
and Scotland, A huge number of British
people chose hotels in England
about 55% followed by Scotland nearly 50%. Self-catering has increased slightly to 30% in Scotland, also
in England
had around 25%. However
, caravan and camping had only under the percentage of 15% in both countries.
Turning to the remaining two countries, many British
people were choosing hotels in Wales and Northern Ireland around more than 40%. Wales was a higher place than Ireland in Self-catering at 28%. Caravan occupied the highest amount of British
persons at 30% in Northern Ireland. Moreover
, camping rank was similar in both the countries under 20%. All of the accommodations were having a lot of fluctuations in 2013.Submitted by katrvn.subramaniyan on
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