The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The given graphs illustrate the percentage of home appliances possession,
as well as
Linking Words
the number of spending
hours
Use synonyms
conducting house chores in about 100
years
Use synonyms
, starting from 1920.
Overall
Linking Words
, it stands out from the charts that household ownership in all three kinds of stuff rose steadily and reached the highest point in 2019,
while
Linking Words
the opposite trend is true for the second graph which we can observe a steady decrease, which resulted in recording the lowest point in the
last
Linking Words
year. In terms of appliance possession, the figures indicate that 20 per cent of people bought fridges and the indicative figure jumped from 0 to about 55 per cent in the first 20
years
Use synonyms
, and a similar trend was seen from 1940 until 1960 with a high rise of about 35% reaching 90% respectively and
finally
Linking Words
reached the full percentage in 1980 sooner than any other rivals.
Likewise
Linking Words
, the possession of vacuum cleaners doubled in about 40
years
Use synonyms
span from 30% to about 70% respectively; it
also
Linking Words
recorded the full ratio of 100% in 2000.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, the opposite figures can be obtained from the second graph in comparison to the former one. People used to do housework about 50
hours
Use synonyms
a week in 1920, but the figures fell gradually in later
years
Use synonyms
. It is
also
Linking Words
obvious, that the working
hours
Use synonyms
dropped dramatically from1920 to 1940, and reached the least rate of about 10
hours
Use synonyms
at the end
Linking Words
.
Submitted by mohammadmgh1381 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 7 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
What to do next:
Look at other essays: