Write about the following topic. To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

As every coin have two sides in the same

ways

eating

insects

also

have two sides advantage

as well as

disadvantage. On the advantage side, eating

insects

has

benefits

like it is good for the body to add energy. As the population is increasing in

this

ways

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eating

insects

is good. Nowadays, the population is increasing

and

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and wants are

also

incrasing

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increasing

is

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in

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same

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the same

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ways

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eating

fish

oil

have

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so many

and

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benefits

. If

fish

which is healthy for vitamins and a child will eat that

then

it is good for

health

. The nation should encourage

to

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people to eat

insects

to save the earth and the environment. Some doctors suggest kids

to

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eat

fish

oil for

the

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good

health

so in

this

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ways

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it is good for the kids. By consuming

animals

so many rich, wheat, and fruit can be saved. On the disadvantage side,

same

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insects

are harmful

for

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the body.

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, If a

fish

have

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health

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problem and a

girls

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girl

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will

it

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that

then

the girl will

also

face a problem which

fish

have so in

this

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it has so many drawbacks. Very few

animals

have

benefits

for

health

. Eating

insects

is harmful to the ecosystem. The government should impose high taxes on the

animals

.

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search

earth

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with people so people should

protact animlas

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protect animals

.

To conclude

, eating or consuming

animlas

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animals

, birds or

insects

have both sides.

Thus

, the above information describes

about

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the

benefits

and drawbacks

for

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eating

insects

.

Hence

, eating

insects

have

adavntages

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advantages

as well as

disadvantages.