A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job

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Dear Isabella, I hope you are doing well! I’m so happy that you decided to spend some time in Brazil but I have to say

that is

Linking Words

not an easy task to find a

job

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in São Paulo because it has a lot of people, fortunately, I have a good contact and I’m writing to give you some good news.

Firstly

Linking Words

, I want to say that I sent some messages to my close ones to see if they heard about some

job

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opportunity so my cousin answered me by saying that the company he is currently working for is searching for a receptionist,

this

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job

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includes receiving clients and serve some coffee and snacks,

also

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you will have to schedule meetings and answer the phone all day.

Secondly

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, as you said in your email, you occupied the same role in your latest

job

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so I think of you immediately since you already did the tasks that the company needs and have all

that is

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necessary to get

this

Linking Words

opportunity. If you want to apply only an email is necessary, you should describe why you are the right person to do

this

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job

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and attach your CV.

This

Linking Words

is the email address you have to send the message [email protected]. If you get the

job

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, please let me know, good luck! Yours lovingly, Karen Agg.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

223 words

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