The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line chart illustrates how much money was needed to purchase bananas in four countries from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Japan and Germany experienced an upward trend,
while
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this
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value in both nations fluctuated over the
period
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; the remaining countries were almost stable in
this
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range of time.
Firstly
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, there was an unstable price for bananas from Japan and Germany; the cost in both countries had a significant fluctuation since the beginning of the
period
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. Japan began with 2$ per kilogram (
Kg
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) and ended with almost 2.5 $ per
Kg
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;
likewise
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, the prices of bananas in Germany moved from 1.5 $ per
Kg
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to around 1.75 $ per
Kg
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in 2004.
Although
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there was a slight increase in
this
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value in the USA between 1997 and 1998,
this
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figure was stable at about 1.25 $ per
Kg
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until the end of the
period
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.
While
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France had an unstable value from 1998 to 20003,
this
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number was equal at the beginning of the
period
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at 2$ per
Kg
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, kg with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Fluctuate
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stable/Stability
  • Significant
  • Gradual
  • Sharp
  • Slight
  • Peak
  • Plummet
  • Spike
  • Level off
  • Dip
  • Plateau
  • Cost
  • Price
  • Currency
  • Decade
  • Year-on-year
  • Economic factors
  • Consumer demand
  • Inflation
  • Market forces
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