The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
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The bar chart provides information on the proportion of weekly income
that is
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spent on eight categories over a fifty-year period.
Overall
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, we can see that income in the late nineteen century is largely spent on food, which is a third more than other categories combined,
whereas
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the largest spending attributed in 2018 is leisure, housing and food, in comparison with twice the figures in the remaining categories. More than a third of earnings went towards eating, which is significantly more than all the figures combined. Followed by spending made towards clothing and footwear (10%) and housing (10%). Household and personal goods, transport and leisure consist of roughly 7 per
cent
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of spending respectively,
while
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the remaining figure of more than 5 per
cent
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is attributed towards fuel and power. Almost half of the people’s earnings in 2018 were spent on Leisure, Housing and Food, ranging from 16 to 22 per
cent
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respectively. 15% of expenditure went towards transport. Household products remain at the same level and a 5 per
cent
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decrease in personal goods,
while
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clothing and footwear, power and fuel remained within five per
cent
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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