Today, TV channels focus more on men’s sport than on women’s sport. Why has this happened? Should TV give equal time to women’s sports and men’s sports?

Nowadays，many find that there are more male

sport

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activities

than female

sport

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activities

on

televisions

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. I will explain in

this

essay why I believe

this

is the case and why the

TV

should give equal

time

to male and female

activities

. In my view,

this

trend is prevalent for three reasons. An obvious reason

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for the issue is that there are more males than females among

the

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sport

lovers. Given

this

, more

sport

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channels choose to play the man’s competitive

sports

to

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more audiences to improve their audience rating. By doing

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, they can make more money from advertisements. Another possible cause contributing to

this

trend is competitive

sports

require very high physical fitness because

it

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needs

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a lot of energy.

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result

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male athletes

is

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more than female athletes, so there are more male

sport

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activities

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television. An often-overlooked factor

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this

issue is the

sponsor

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of male

activities

is more

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than women so

that

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TV

managers have to choose more male competitive

sports

. I believe it is significant for

TV

programs to give equal

time

to both male and female

sports

. First of all female consumption ability is higher than

man

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men's

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, if there are more

sports

activities

on

TV

, more female

audience

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may well be attracted by it. Given

this

, it

is

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not only can improve the

TV

audience rating

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but

also

can help to increase some companies’ profits,

such

as sportswear companies and the program sponsor’s company.

In addition

, more female

sport

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programs may well attract more women to participate in exercises. By doing so, it can help people to improve their physical fitness, and some women who

is

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shy or don’t want to be suntanned

,

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may well choose to exercise indoors, like gym and fitness rooms.

Thus

, it can increase their earnings too.

To sum up

, there are obvious reasons for

this

trend, and I tend to side with the opinion that the television program should give equal

time

to both male and female

sport

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activities

.Today,

TV

channels focus more on men’s

sport

than on women’s

sport

. Why has

this

happened? Should

TV

give equal

time

to women’s

sports

and men’s

sports

?