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The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010

The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
#show #village #stockefort
The maps compare how the village of Stockefort changed in 1930 and the new version in 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
farmland
has
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was
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 demolished,
while
 accommodations were increased in 2010.
At
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east
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the east
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 side of the map, there was
a
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farmland
 and a few
building
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buildings
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 (
primary
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a primary
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 school and gardens);
farmland
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the farmland
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 had
destroyed
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been destroyed
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 and
replanced
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replaced
replanted
 with
new
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a new
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residental
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residential
 area in 2010,
the
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and the
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 gardens had
resized
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been resized
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 to be smaller than
1930
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in 1930
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, which only
cover
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covered
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the
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a
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 large house. Meanwhile, there was
a
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several
number of
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houses and road constructed in
this
 area,
which
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and
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 the road and accommodations were placed
on
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in
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 the area that was
a
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farmland
 before.
However
, the primary school and
lage
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large
 house had
expaned
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expanded
,
which
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and
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 the massive house
do
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did
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 not have
the
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an
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 owner in 2013.
Likewise
, the
farmland
at
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on
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west
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the west
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 side
had
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was
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 removed and replaced with new houses and ring roads, which
constructed
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were constructed
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 from the main street.
Although
 the post office not
changed
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change
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 in
this
 period, the shops next to
this
 building
was
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were
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 changed to
new
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a new
the new
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 road that
surround
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was surrounded
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 by accommodations.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words farmland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • landscape
  • sparse population
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • recreational facilities
  • agricultural lands
  • local economy
  • transportation infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • public amenities
  • green spaces
  • quality of life
  • historical buildings
  • landmarks
  • preservation
  • urban development
  • environmental impacts
  • natural landscapes
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