The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words
The diagram
provide
information regarding the change in the floor plan of a public library. It discussed the contrast between the paid of two decades and the present.
Change the verb form
provides
Overall
, it is clearly seen from the first glance that library
layout has been updated to include more advanced facilities. Correct article usage
the library
However
, the most drastic change in the library was table
and chairs which Correct article usage
the table
has
been removed Correct subject-verb agreement
have
for
the open Change preposition
from
space
.
On the top left corner, there used to be a section for computer and video games,which has been replaced by an area holding storytelling events including children's fiction
books and two sofas. The lecture area now occupies the space
where the childrens
book used to be, opposite the Correct your spelling
children's
children
cafes
store, taking the place of the previous enquiry desk. Change noun form
cafe's
Furthermore
, the adult non
Add a hyphen
non-fiction
fiction
books space
between the lecture room and cafe has been reconstructed into a sport of adult fiction
book
and an information desk. Fix the agreement mistake
books
Also
, the feature of self service
Add a hyphen
self-service
machine
has been added in Fix the agreement mistake
machines
this
area.
Likewise
, the central feature used to have two round shape tables surrounded by seats, which have no
been demolished for open Correct your spelling
not
space
. the
reading room on Capitalize word
The
left
side of the entrance was constructed as a computer spot. Add an article
the left
Moreover
,a section for all reference literature modified
which was a place for adult Add a missing verb
was modified
fiction
bill
.Fix the agreement mistake
bills
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Vocabulary: Replace the words space, fiction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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