The charts below show the chnages in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many hours were spent on ownership of electrical appliances, and doing housework in households in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the usage of washing Linking Words
machines
was the highest in the beginning Use synonyms
year
and started to fall Use synonyms
at the end
of the given period. Linking Words
In contrast
, refrigerators peaked in the same Linking Words
years
. To start with the first three Use synonyms
years
, washing Use synonyms
machines
increased steadily from 1920 to 1960, which started at 40%, the refrigerator drastically increased to 90%, which beat the washing machine and vacuum cleaner both at 70%. Use synonyms
However
, after 1960, washing Linking Words
machines
slightly decreased by the Use synonyms
year
of 1980. During the decade, it witnessed working housework timings were continuously reduced Use synonyms
year
by Use synonyms
year
. At the same Use synonyms
time
the refrigerator and vacuum cleaner jumped to 100% over the Add a comma
time,
years
. Meanwhile, washing Use synonyms
machines
were gradually going downwards at approximately 75% in 2019. Use synonyms
Finally
, the working hours of the housework declined to 10 hours per week over the Linking Words
years
.Use synonyms
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