Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is an important public debate among people in society regarding the main environmental
problem
of our time. Existance
of many environmental Correct your spelling
Existence
problems
has raised more concern in public
about finding the main environmental Correct article usage
the public
problem
. Some animal activists have believed that the main problem
is loosing
specific Replace the word
losing
species
and plants and animals. On the other hand
common sense think
that there are much more important environmental Correct subject-verb agreement
thinks
issues
in our time. This
essay will evaluate both views regrad
to the Correct your spelling
regard
afformentioned
topic and will discuss Correct your spelling
aforementioned
personal
Add an article
the personal
view
of the author.
In general, looking after endangered Fix the agreement mistake
views
species
and trying best
to keep their habitat safe will have a positive impact on one of the most important environmental Correct pronoun usage
their best
issues
. Animals and plants leave
with us Correct your spelling
live
in
Change preposition
on
this
planet and this
is also
their home. So its
our duty to prevent these Replace the word
it's
it is
speciecs
from extinction. Correct your spelling
species
Also
immediate actions should be taken to Add a comma
,Also
preventing
Wrong verb form
prevent
this
. Besides
this
environmental issue, there are some other problems
in this
criteria that also
plays
a significant role in human Change the verb form
play
life
.For instance
, air pollution not only adverse human life
, but also
thretening
so many Correct your spelling
threatens
species
, specificaly
birds. Either human Correct your spelling
specifically
life
or other species
Change noun form
species'
life
will change due to
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
issues
.
Personally, I think so many environmental features has
played Change the verb form
have
significant
role in nature and Add an article
a significant
life
on the earth. Human beings as a part of nature has also
been experiencing these effects since its creation as a kind of specie.However
, protecting diffrent
Correct your spelling
different
species
is our duty, due to
the destruction that has leaded
by us in nature with different justifications, some other environmental Correct your spelling
led
problems
such
as air pollution should be prioritise
over Change the verb form
be prioritised
this
specific issue.
In a nutshell, meanwhile loss of particular species
of plants and animals are
important, but it Correct subject-verb agreement
is
is'nt
the main environmental Correct your spelling
isn't
problem
that society has been facing these days. Some other environmental issues
like poluted
air can be much more harmful to our Correct your spelling
polluted
life
and immediate actions should be taken to solve Fix the agreement mistake
lives
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
problems
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