Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is an important public debate among people in society regarding the main environmental

problem

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of our time.

Existance

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Existence

of many environmental

problems

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has raised more concern in

public

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the public

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about finding the main environmental

problem

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. Some animal activists have believed that the main

problem

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loosing

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specific

species

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and plants and animals.

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common sense

think

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thinks

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that there are much more important environmental

issues

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in our time.

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essay will evaluate both views

regrad

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regard

to the

afformentioned

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aforementioned

topic and will discuss

personal

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view

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views

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of the author. In general, looking after endangered

species

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and trying

best

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their best

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to keep their habitat safe will have a positive impact on one of the most important environmental

issues

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. Animals and plants

leave

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live

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with us

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this

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planet and

this

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also

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their home. So

its

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it's

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our duty to prevent these

speciecs

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species

from extinction.

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Also

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immediate actions should be taken to

preventing

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this

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Besides

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this

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environmental issue, there are some other

problems

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this

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criteria that

also

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plays

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a significant role in human

life

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, air pollution not only adverse human

life

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, but

also

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thretening

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threatens

so many

species

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specificaly

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specifically

birds. Either human

life

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or other

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species

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species'

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life

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will change

due to

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these kind

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this kind

these kinds

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issues

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. Personally, I think so many environmental features

has

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have

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played

significant

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a significant

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role in nature and

life

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on the earth. Human beings as a part of nature has

also

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been experiencing these effects since its creation as a kind of specie.

However

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, protecting

diffrent

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different

species

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is our duty,

due to

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the destruction that has

leaded

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led

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by us in nature with different justifications, some other environmental

problems

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such

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as air pollution should

be prioritise

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be prioritised

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over

this

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specific issue. In a nutshell, meanwhile loss of particular

species

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of plants and animals

are

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important, but it

is'nt

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isn't

the main environmental

problem

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that society has been facing these days. Some other environmental

issues

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poluted

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polluted

air can be much more harmful to our

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life

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lives

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and immediate actions should be taken to solve

these kind

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this kind

these kinds

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problems

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Sep 8, 2023

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
extinction
habitat loss
ecosystem
food chain
imbalance
interconnected
climate change
pollution
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