The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
report derives from the tables which illustrate the weather conditions and time of daylight in two cities, which are London
and Sydney
, in the same weekend that chosen from December 2018.
A good starting point would be to say that Sydney
was more
hotter than Change the word
apply
London
over the period shown, and people who lived in Sydney
could take
Correct your spelling
make
profit
from Correct article usage
a profit
sun
much better than Londoners.
The first result worth pointing out is thatAdd an article
the sun
,
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apply
sun
rose before Add an article
the sun
than
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in
London
, at 05:45, whilst, sun
could be seen for nearly 15 Add an article
the sun
hours
in Sydney
at
Friday Change preposition
on
28th
which was the coldest Correct article usage
the 28th
day
for Sydney
with maximum
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a maximum
26
Change preposition
of 26
C
, and minimum
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a minimum
17
Change preposition
of 17
C
over the three days. On the other hand
, in
the same Change preposition
on
day
, London
lived the coldest day
too, with maximum
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a maximum
9
Change preposition
of 9
C
, and minimum
Correct article usage
a minimum
4
Change preposition
of 4
C
compared to the days shown. However
, this
Change preposition
on this
days
sunrise time was 08:05 in Fix the agreement mistake
day
London
, and sun
could be seen for approimately 8 hours
.
Another information that can be observed is that, the hottest day
for Sydney
was sunday (like its name) 30th with maximum 31 C
, and minimum 19 C
conversely
this
day
was not the hottest day
for London
; Londeners could lived with hotter sunlight at Saturday 29th with maximum 13 C
, and minimum 3 C
. It can be also
clearly seen from the tables, the amount of time that can be seen sun
is nearly 8 hours
for London
while
the sun
can be seen for approximately in 15 hours
in Sydney
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, sydney, sun, hours, day, c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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