The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
report derives from the tables which illustrate the weather conditions and time of daylight in two cities, which are Linking Words
London
and Use synonyms
Sydney
, in the same weekend that chosen from December 2018.
A good starting point would be to say that Use synonyms
Sydney
was Use synonyms
more
hotter than Change the word
apply
London
over the period shown, and people who lived in Use synonyms
Sydney
could Use synonyms
take
Correct your spelling
make
profit
from Correct article usage
a profit
Use synonyms
sun
much better than Londoners.
The first result worth pointing out is thatAdd an article
the sun
,
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apply
Use synonyms
sun
rose before Add an article
the sun
than
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in
London
, at 05:45, whilst, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
sun
could be seen for nearly 15 Add an article
the sun
hours
in Use synonyms
Sydney
Use synonyms
at
Friday Change preposition
on
28th
which was the coldest Correct article usage
the 28th
day
for Use synonyms
Sydney
with Use synonyms
maximum
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a maximum
26
Change preposition
of 26
C
, and Use synonyms
minimum
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a minimum
17
Change preposition
of 17
C
over the three days. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
in
the same Change preposition
on
day
, Use synonyms
London
lived the coldest Use synonyms
day
too, with Use synonyms
maximum
Correct article usage
a maximum
9
Change preposition
of 9
C
, and Use synonyms
minimum
Correct article usage
a minimum
4
Change preposition
of 4
C
compared to the days shown. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
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this
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on this
days
sunrise time was 08:05 in Fix the agreement mistake
day
London
, and Use synonyms
sun
could be seen for approimately 8 Use synonyms
hours
.
Another information that can be observed is that, the hottest Use synonyms
day
for Use synonyms
Sydney
was sunday (like its name) 30th with maximum 31 Use synonyms
C
, and minimum 19 Use synonyms
C
Use synonyms
conversely
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this
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day
was not the hottest Use synonyms
day
for Use synonyms
London
; Londeners could lived with hotter sunlight at Saturday 29th with maximum 13 Use synonyms
C
, and minimum 3 Use synonyms
C
. It can be Use synonyms
also
clearly seen from the tables, the amount of time that can be seen Linking Words
sun
is nearly 8 Use synonyms
hours
for Use synonyms
London
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while
the Linking Words
sun
can be seen for approximately in 15 Use synonyms
hours
in Use synonyms
Sydney
.Use synonyms
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