The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The line graph below represents information about
residents
from the
UK
who visited different
countries
,
as well as
, tourists who visited the United Kingdom.
Also
, there is the bar chart which illustrates
countries
which
UK
citizens preferred to visit in 1999. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it could be seen that major difference between the proportion of people who visited the
UK
and
UK
residents
who visited other
countries
.
Moreover
, there is
also
a noticeable fact that France was a leader among other
countries
because people preferred to visit it more. In detail, from 1979 to 1986 the proportion of these two groups grew and in 1986 the number of visitors from the
UK
reached 20
million
and the number of tourists who visited the
UK
reached nearly 15
million
.
After
this
year, the proportion of
UK
visitors continued to rise gradually and in 1999 reached around 38
million
.
Nevertheless
, the number of
residents
who visited different
countries
increased significantly and in 1999 it was more than 50
million
. Among
UK
residents
the most popular country in 1999 was France more than 10
million
people visited it.
In addition
, the second most popular country was Spain around 9
million
visited it.
However
, the less popular country was Turkey only 3
million
individuals were there in 1999.
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