Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are a lot of people

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believes

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believe

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that

main

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the main

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environmental

problem

is the loss of

particular

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a particular

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population

of plants and animals.

While

others argue that there any

others

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other

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environmental problems

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is

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more essential nowadays. In

this

essay, I will discuss both

of

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views

between

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on

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the

population

of

endanger

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endangered

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animal

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animals

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and the bad

air

pollution

for human lives. A species endangered animal is the main environmental

problem

in

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on

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the earth nowadays. The

population

of

endanger

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endangered

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animal

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animals

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decreasing

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decreases

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over

the

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apply

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time which

is causes

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is caused

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extinct

animal

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animals

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in the future. The condition may

occur

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cause

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if their

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their

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if their

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habitat

have

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to be

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broken for certain

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businesses

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business

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businesses

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such

as for new mining

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areas

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area

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areas

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or new

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industries

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industry

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industries

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.

Such happening

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in Kalimantan,

there

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There

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are many

rainforest

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rainforests

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in Kalimantan as a

habitat

for

Orang

Utan

. Currently, deforestation for

new

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the new

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mining sector

happened

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is happening

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in the part of Kalimantan for business purposes.

As a result

,

Orang

Utan

get

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lose

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lost

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their

habitat

. It

is causes

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causes

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the

population

of

Orang

Utan

is

decreasing

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decrease

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over

the

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apply

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time. Maybe our next generation

is

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will find it

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impossible to meet

Orang

Utan

again in the future.

Besides

, there is another essential environmental issue booming nowadays.

This

problem

is having

direct

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a direct

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impact

for

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on

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human lives. The bad

air

quality,

this

issue is

being

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apply

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the main environmental

problem

. It

was happened

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happened

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from the gas emission over

than

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apply

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the standard level

gas

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of gas

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emission set by the government. Most of the bad gas

emission

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emissions

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is coming

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come

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from vehicles, coal power generators and

also

factory.

Such

happened in Jakarta nowadays, the level of

air

pollution

is

unhealthy

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an unhealthy

the unhealthy

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category.

The bad

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Bad

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air

pollution

can

threat

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threaten

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human health

such

as respiratory tract

infection

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infections

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.

In

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this

situation

is

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has

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being serious impact

for

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on

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all people in the city specifically

for

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on

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older people

as well as

babies' lives.

To conclude

, there are many environmental problems nowadays.

Decreasing

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The decreasing

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of

endanger

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endangered

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animal

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animals

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is

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will

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becoming

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become

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extinct animal in the future if the

habitat

of

Orang

Utan

changed

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to being new business area.

On the other hand

, there is another environmental

problem

have

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has

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been happening

about

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apply

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the effect

bad

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of bad

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air

pollution

which is being serious

problem

for human health in the city.