The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart
provided
the Verb problem
shows
number
of the
Correct article usage
apply
expense
Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
on
six Change preposition
for
consumer
goods
in four countries in European
. Correct your spelling
Europe
Overall
, Photographic film
and Toys
provided the highest amount
of expenditure. On the other hand
, Tennis
racquets
and personal stereos
showed the lowest number
of spent.
The amount
of Britain's expense
was led almost in all consumer
goods
categories
. The four categories
consist of photographic film
, toys
, CDs
and perfumes provided
the highest Wrong verb form
providing
number
at above 160. Besides
, tennis
racquets
and personal stereos
followed in the same number
was 155. Compared with the expense
of French consumer
goods
, the highest amount
of the three categories
was photographic film
, toys
, and CDs
were above 155. on
the contrary, the other Capitalize word
On
categories
showed an amount
below 150.
On the other hand
, the highest number
of Italy consumer
goods
was toys
at around 157. It was followed by tennis
racquets
and perfumes at 155. CDs
and personal stereos
expense
showed amount
at 150. However
, the amount
of Germany's consumer
goods
was the lowest number
compared with 3 other European countries. The categories
of photographic film
, perfumes and tennis
racquets
provided at
the same Change preposition
apply
amount
around 150. The three other categories
consist of personal stereos
, toys
and CDs
showed a number
below 147Submitted by haloalwan on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, expense, consumer, goods, film, toys, amount, tennis, racquets, stereos, categories, cds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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