The maps show the developments which happened between 1990 and 2005.

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The maps show the developments which happened between 1990 and 2005. In 1990,the seaside resort was much greener in dwelling area with many

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trees. During 15 years,there wasn’t much difference. The most noticeable change is new buildings and

supermarket

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near

north-west

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the north-west

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. The woods on

south west

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were cut down.

House

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A house

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nearby

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school was knocked down. Trees and houses

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north-east

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the north-east

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were replaced by

factory

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factories

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. Under the railway station constructed Ferry.

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, the railway station has increased and set up under new buildings and factory on

north

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. A few trees

were chop

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down

substituted

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and substituted

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airport

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the airport

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. There

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are more

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changes

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the west

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west

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than

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east

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. Airport,factory and fewer houses than 15 years ago,on the east side in 2005.

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west

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the west

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much more skyscrapers,

new

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and new

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supermarket

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supermarkets

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railway station which divides the sea,and the new ferry.

Overall

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,weighing up

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the two maps reveals a difference between rural seaside

resort

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and new seaside

resort

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with many facilities and more

modern

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

156 words

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The maps show the developments which happened between 1990 and 2005.

Many people think that the government should spend more money on providing faster means of public transport. Some others think that there are important priorities(e.g.cost, environment). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many countries have embraced tourism as a way to boost their economies and create jobs for local residents. However, some argue that tourism can have negative impacts on the environment and local cultures. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism for a country?

The development of tourism has contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

13.Today, some food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only eat locally produced food. To what extent do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?