the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The given map highlights data about an industrial place in the town of Norbiton and the predetermined future evolvement of the site.
Overall
, it can be seen that there will be more construction
such
as a Playground, Schools, shops, and a medical centre in Norbiton. In the present day, the area is surrounded by factories in the
center
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of the roundabout, and the east zone is linked by a long street. In the north, there is a Farmland, which is separated by a
river
. In the future, all factories will be replaced by houses.
As a result
, there will be new public facilities available for people,
such
as a Playground, Schools, shops, and a Medical
center
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. There will be a small roundabout near the Shop and the Medical Center.
In addition
, it is forecasted that there will be street expansion in the Northwest, and the North side will divide the
river
.
Furthermore
, Farmland
also
will be moved to the Northeast near the
river
.
Moreover
, near the
river
on the North side will be built houses too.
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