the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

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The given map highlights data about an industrial place in the town of Norbiton and the predetermined future evolvement of the site.

Overall

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, it can be seen that there will be more construction

such

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as a Playground, Schools, shops, and a medical centre in Norbiton. In the present day, the area is surrounded by factories in the

center

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of the roundabout, and the east zone is linked by a long street. In the north, there is a Farmland, which is separated by a

river

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. In the future, all factories will be replaced by houses.

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, there will be new public facilities available for people,

such

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as a Playground, Schools, shops, and a Medical

center

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. There will be a small roundabout near the Shop and the Medical Center.

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, it is forecasted that there will be street expansion in the Northwest, and the North side will divide the

river

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, Farmland

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will be moved to the Northeast near the

river

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, near the

river

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on the North side will be built houses too.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

176 words

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