the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

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The given map highlights data about an industrial place in the town of Norbiton and the predetermined future evolvement of the site.

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, it can be seen that there will be more construction

such

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as a Playground, Schools, shops, and a medical centre in Norbiton. In the present day, the area is surrounded by factories in the

center

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of the roundabout, and the east zone is linked by a long street. In the north, there is a Farmland, which is separated by a

river

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. In the future, all factories will be replaced by houses.

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, there will be new public facilities available for people,

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as a Playground, Schools, shops, and a Medical

center

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. There will be a small roundabout near the Shop and the Medical Center.

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, it is forecasted that there will be street expansion in the Northwest, and the North side will divide the

river

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, Farmland

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will be moved to the Northeast near the

river

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, near the

river

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on the North side will be built houses too.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

176 words

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the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Some parents and teachers think that children’s behavior should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A big salary is more important than job satisfaction? Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that nowadays there are too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Education should be accessible to people of all economic background. All level of education from primary school to tertiary education should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion.

The company you work for has decided to close the cafeteria as the staff is not using it much. You are not happy with the decision. Write a letter to the director: - Give reasons of low usage - How will it affect the staff - Suggest ways to improve it