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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart demonstrates the amounts of misuse in
tonnes
 in three enterprises, namely A,
B
 and
C
 over a period of 15 years.
Company
C
 shows an upward
trend
,
while
 enterprise A and firm
B
 follow a downward
trend
. The years from 2000 to 2005 saw a moderate rise in the amount of
waste
 in
company
C
 from 4
tonnes
 to 6
tonnes
, growing slightly to 7
tonnes
 in 2010 and dramatically climbing to 10
tonnes
 in 2015.
However
,
company
 A and
company
B
 follow an opposite
trend
. The amount of
waste
 in firm A saw a moderate decline from 12
tonnes
 in 2000 to 8
tonnes
 in 2015. There is a decrease in the amount of
waste
 in firm
B
 from 8
tonnes
 in 2000 to 3
tonnes
 in 2015, except a growth from 8
tonnes
 to the peak of 9
tonnes
. In conclusion, it is clearly seen that
company
B
 and
company
C
 have declined their
waste
 from 2000 to 2015. They pay much attention to reducing
waste
.
On the contrary
, enterprise A keeps an upward
trend
 at the same period. It should raise awareness of declining
waste
, which is very vital.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, b, c, company, trend, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amounts" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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