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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart demonstrates the amounts of misuse in
tonnes
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 in three enterprises, namely A,
B
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 and
C
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 over a period of 15 years.
Company
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C
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 shows an upward
trend
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,
while
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 enterprise A and firm
B
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 follow a downward
trend
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. The years from 2000 to 2005 saw a moderate rise in the amount of
waste
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 in
company
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C
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 from 4
tonnes
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 to 6
tonnes
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, growing slightly to 7
tonnes
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 in 2010 and dramatically climbing to 10
tonnes
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 in 2015.
However
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,
company
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 A and
company
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B
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 follow an opposite
trend
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. The amount of
waste
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 in firm A saw a moderate decline from 12
tonnes
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 in 2000 to 8
tonnes
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 in 2015. There is a decrease in the amount of
waste
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 in firm
B
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 from 8
tonnes
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 in 2000 to 3
tonnes
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 in 2015, except a growth from 8
tonnes
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 to the peak of 9
tonnes
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. In conclusion, it is clearly seen that
company
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B
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 and
company
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C
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 have declined their
waste
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 from 2000 to 2015. They pay much attention to reducing
waste
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.
On the contrary
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, enterprise A keeps an upward
trend
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 at the same period. It should raise awareness of declining
waste
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, which is very vital.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, b, c, company, trend, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amounts" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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