Some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Investigating the history of the house or building that they live in is becoming more popular among

people

in some countries.

Due to

religion

people

believe and

curiosity

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about

houses

being too affordable. Not only do

people

find

information

through asking the locals but

also

through internet searching. Some countries believe in ghosts or supernatural things which are related to religions in each country.

Also

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it is linked with the unexpected price of accommodations that are cheaper than the estimated price. The reason is that Buddhism believes in ghosts or untouchable things and feel them through our senses. Some might concern about the past owners whether they died here at home or somewhere else. If they die at home, their soul might stuck at home and

we

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won't feel a sense of belonging even though

we

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buy

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houses

already

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according to

the

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Buddhist belief.

For example

, the Thai population are mainly Buddhist, we don't usually buy a

second hand

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houses

because it takes much effort to know about the background of

houses

. But if we had to stay, we would let the monks or the horoscope

to

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wipe out all

ghost

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so that we feel mentally relaxed and feel a genuine sense of belonging.

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if the

houses

are too cheap,

this

will trigger them that there might be something

went

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wrong with

these house

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this house

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either someone

is

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has been

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murdered or the owner is desperately

need

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in need

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for

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money. There are many reasons why

people

are focusing

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on the background of their habitats so that local’s

belief

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beliefs

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and unusual price of

stays

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. Nowadays, investigating for

information

is easy. The Internet is

such

a convenient way to look for rough

information

.

On the other hand

, talking to local and neighbours is the best way to obtain most

information

because we can ask all the questions we would like to know and the data is from their experiences

such

as how often crime

happen

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here, is there anyone ever live here and etc. the questions like

this

is

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common among Thai

people

because we interact with one another all the time, we don't worried of facing each other. Importantly, we like to look after each other’s

houses

when someone is away.

It is clear that

spending time talking to locals will gain so much knowledge and the easiest way to

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. In conclusion,

in

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some nations consider

about

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the background of their stay and like to dig for more

information

.

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essay mentioned the religion’s

belief

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beliefs

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and

people

’s curiosity.

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essay

is

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also

mentioned

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about

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getting yourself

connect

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with local

people

is the most efficient method.