Some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Investigating the history of the house or building that they live in is becoming more popular among
people
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in some countries.
Due to
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religion
people
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believe and
curiosity
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about
houses
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being too affordable. Not only do
people
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find
information
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through asking the locals but
also
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through internet searching. Some countries believe in ghosts or supernatural things which are related to religions in each country.
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it is linked with the unexpected price of accommodations that are cheaper than the estimated price. The reason is that Buddhism believes in ghosts or untouchable things and feel them through our senses. Some might concern about the past owners whether they died here at home or somewhere else. If they die at home, their soul might stuck at home and
we
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won't feel a sense of belonging even though
we
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buy
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bought
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houses
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already
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according to
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the
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Buddhist belief.
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, the Thai population are mainly Buddhist, we don't usually buy a
second hand
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houses
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because it takes much effort to know about the background of
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. But if we had to stay, we would let the monks or the horoscope
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wipe out all
ghost
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ghosts
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so that we feel mentally relaxed and feel a genuine sense of belonging.
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if the
houses
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are too cheap,
this
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will trigger them that there might be something
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wrong with
these house
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this house
these houses
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either someone
is
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murdered or the owner is desperately
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in need
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for
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of
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money. There are many reasons why
people
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are focusing
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focus
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on the background of their habitats so that local’s
belief
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beliefs
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and unusual price of
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stay
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. Nowadays, investigating for
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is easy. The Internet is
such
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a convenient way to look for rough
information
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.
On the other hand
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, talking to local and neighbours is the best way to obtain most
information
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because we can ask all the questions we would like to know and the data is from their experiences
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as how often crime
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here, is there anyone ever live here and etc. the questions like
this
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is
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common among Thai
people
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because we interact with one another all the time, we don't worried of facing each other. Importantly, we like to look after each other’s
houses
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when someone is away.
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spending time talking to locals will gain so much knowledge and the easiest way to
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. In conclusion,
in
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some nations consider
about
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the background of their stay and like to dig for more
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.
This
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essay mentioned the religion’s
belief
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beliefs
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and
people
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’s curiosity.
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essay
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also
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mentioned
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mentions
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about
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that
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getting yourself
connect
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connected
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with local
people
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is the most efficient method.
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