The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the quantities of leftovers by
companies
A, B
, and C
throughout 15 years
. Overall
, companies
A and B
have reduced waste
production
over time, while
company
C
has increased waste
production
.
Even though Company
A produced the highest amount of leftovers in the year 2000 at 12 tonnes
, in 15 years
they reduced the production
of waste
by almost 4 tonnes
. Therefore
there was a significant reduction in waste
production
at company
A. In the first 5 years
, there were drastic increases in waste
production
in companies
B
and C
but, the quantity of leftovers dramatically reduced after 2005 until 2015 in Company
B
, while
company
Capitalize word
Company
C
significantly increased their waste
quantity from six tonnes
to ten tonnes
over ten years
.
However
, Company
C
produced the lowest amount of waste
in the year 2000, compared to the other two companies
but , in the year 2015, Company
C
produced the highest amount of waste
compared to the other 2 companies
. In contrast
with the three companies
, company
B
had the lowest waste
production
in 2015, and they have reduced their waste
production
by five tonnes
over 15 years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words companies, b, c, years, waste, production, company, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
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