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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the quantities of leftovers by
companies
 A,
B
, and
C
 throughout 15
years
.
Overall
,
companies
 A and
B
 have reduced
waste
production
 over time,
while
company
C
 has increased
waste
production
. Even though
Company
 A produced the highest amount of leftovers in the year 2000 at 12
tonnes
, in 15
years
 they reduced the
production
 of
waste
 by almost 4
tonnes
.
Therefore
 there was a significant reduction in
waste
production
 at
company
 A. In the first 5
years
, there were drastic increases in
waste
production
 in
companies
B
 and
C
 but, the quantity of leftovers dramatically reduced after 2005 until 2015 in
Company
B
,
while
company
Capitalize word
Company
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C
 significantly increased their
waste
 quantity from six
tonnes
 to ten
tonnes
 over ten
years
.
However
,
Company
C
 produced the lowest amount of
waste
 in the year 2000, compared to the other two
companies
 but , in the year 2015,
Company
C
 produced the highest amount of
waste
 compared to the other 2
companies
.
In contrast
 with the three
companies
,
company
B
 had the lowest
waste
production
 in 2015, and they have reduced their
waste
production
 by five
tonnes
 over 15
years
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words companies, b, c, years, waste, production, company, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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