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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the quantities of leftovers by
companies
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 A,
B
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, and
C
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 throughout 15
years
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.
Overall
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,
companies
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 A and
B
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 have reduced
waste
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production
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 over time,
while
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company
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C
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 has increased
waste
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production
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. Even though
Company
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 A produced the highest amount of leftovers in the year 2000 at 12
tonnes
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, in 15
years
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 they reduced the
production
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 of
waste
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 by almost 4
tonnes
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.
Therefore
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 there was a significant reduction in
waste
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production
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 at
company
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 A. In the first 5
years
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, there were drastic increases in
waste
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production
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 in
companies
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B
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 and
C
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 but, the quantity of leftovers dramatically reduced after 2005 until 2015 in
Company
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B
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,
while
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company
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Company
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C
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 significantly increased their
waste
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 quantity from six
tonnes
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 to ten
tonnes
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 over ten
years
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.
However
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,
Company
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C
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 produced the lowest amount of
waste
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 in the year 2000, compared to the other two
companies
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 but , in the year 2015,
Company
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C
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 produced the highest amount of
waste
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 compared to the other 2
companies
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.
In contrast
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 with the three
companies
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,
company
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B
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 had the lowest
waste
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production
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 in 2015, and they have reduced their
waste
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production
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 by five
tonnes
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 over 15
years
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words companies, b, c, years, waste, production, company, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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