The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The line graph illustrates the quantities of leftovers by

companies

, and

throughout 15

years

Overall

companies

A and

have reduced

waste

production

over time,

while

company

has increased

waste

production

. Even though

Company

A produced the highest amount of leftovers in the year 2000 at 12

tonnes

, in 15

years

they reduced the

production

waste

by almost 4

tonnes

Therefore

there was a significant reduction in

waste

production

company

A. In the first 5

years

, there were drastic increases in

waste

production

companies

and

but, the quantity of leftovers dramatically reduced after 2005 until 2015 in

Company

while

company

Capitalize word

Company

show examples

significantly increased their

waste

quantity from six

tonnes

to ten

tonnes

over ten

years

However

Company

produced the lowest amount of

waste

in the year 2000, compared to the other two

companies

but , in the year 2015,

Company

produced the highest amount of

waste

compared to the other 2

companies

In contrast

with the three

companies

company

had the lowest

waste

production

in 2015, and they have reduced their

waste

production

by five

tonnes

over 15

years

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