The maps below show university sports court in 1990 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

displays

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maps

describes

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university

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the university

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sports

court

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in 1990 and now. The below information

describe

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describes

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changing

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changes

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made from 1990 to now. In 1990, there was a park with so many

tress

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trees

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nearby

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car

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the car

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park.

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the

reception

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there was a small cafe and a changing room. There was even

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outdoor pool

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tennis

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a tennis

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court

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. Now, there is a basketball

court

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and

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tennis

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a tennis

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court

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. There is even a cafe, reception, indoor pool, changing room and fitness centre. There has been a great change from 1990 to now they are small

tennis

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court

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noe

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now

update

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into

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a big

tennis

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court

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. Some new things are added

such

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as basketball

counrt

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court

courts

. More facilities are added now in the university sports

court

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To conclude

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, the above information

describe

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describes

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the change that

talk

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took

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place from 1990 to now. There is

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great change made from 1990 to now in the university

sport

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sports

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court

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words court, tennis with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

151 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Layout
Ancillary facilities
Sports hall
Relocated
State-of-the-art
Modern fitness center
Development and expansion
Increased emphasis
Accommodate
Participants
Green spaces
Wellness
Recreation

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The maps below show university sports court in 1990 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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