The maps below show university sports court in 1990 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show university sports court in 1990 and now. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
displays
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maps
describes
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describe
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university
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the university
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sports
court
in 1990 and now. The below information
describe
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describes
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changing
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changes
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made from 1990 to now. In 1990, there was a park with so many
tress
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trees
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nearby
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near
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car
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the car
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park.
On
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the
reception
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,reception
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there was a small cafe and a changing room. There was even
a
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an
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outdoor pool
as well as
tennis
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a tennis
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court
. Now, there is a basketball
court
and
tennis
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a tennis
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court
. There is even a cafe, reception, indoor pool, changing room and fitness centre. There has been a great change from 1990 to now they are small
tennis
court
is
noe
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now
update
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to
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into
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a big
tennis
court
. Some new things are added
such
as basketball
counrt
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court
courts
. More facilities are added now in the university sports
court
.
To conclude
, the above information
describe
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describes
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the change that
talk
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took
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place from 1990 to now. There is
an
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a
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great change made from 1990 to now in the university
sport
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sports
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court
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words court, tennis with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout
  • Ancillary facilities
  • Sports hall
  • Relocated
  • State-of-the-art
  • Modern fitness center
  • Development and expansion
  • Increased emphasis
  • Accommodate
  • Participants
  • Green spaces
  • Wellness
  • Recreation
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