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plastic bags bottles and plastic packaging are bad foreign environment. But damage does plastic do to the environment and what steps do government and individuals can take to solve this problem

#plastic #bags #bottles #environment #damage #steps #government #individuals
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Plastics
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 is one of the big problems of our nature. As time passes the effect of
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 has more In the
last
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 decade
governments
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 and individuals have taken care of the environment. In
this
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 essay, the exact issue and what has been done will be discussed. In the long term,
plastics
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 getting more
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 than
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 been.
Plastics
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 is more flexible in shape and it is cheap for companies to
use
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 for their parcel but the problem arises when
governments
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 want to burn them or recycle them which needs more money.
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governments
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 our world getting hotter and hotter and
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 cause is related to
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. but
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, individuals have taken some steps, As they
use
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 fewer
plastic
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 bottles or using them several times and schools are teaching the students how to future would look like if
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 continues and it gets to the culture of people.
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,
governments
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 make companies not
use
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plastic
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 or if they do they have to recycle it as the company's responsibility. Nowadays, there are a lot of warnings on the back of
plastic
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 bags or bottles and those warnings but they can be bigger and more efficient.
Governments
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 need to give points to people who collect
plastic
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 bags and reuse them as much as they can. In summary, there is a lot to think about in
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, recycling is getting more and in our ,education one of the majors that has been taught is how to
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plastics
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 correctly.
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