You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: apologise for the damage to the item explain what happened say how you are going to fix the issue

Dear Anna, I am glad to know that you are promoted to manager. The

book

I borrowed from you got damaged. I am really sorry about that. Let me explain what happened.

While

was reading the

book

last

night in my room, I got a call from my colleague, John. It was an important call related to my work. To reach better network coverage, I just moved to the living room for a few minutes. Once I finished the call, I returned to my desk to continue reading. I was shocked to see that the coffee which I was drinking

spilled

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on the

book

, and Ferry,my dog, was looking at that. I have searched at the bookshops in the town to get a new one, but I couldn't find it. I have ordered the

book

on Amazon and It will

be arrived

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arrive

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within three days. I will

handover

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hand over

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the

book

to you at Joy's birthday party. Best Regards, Jennifer.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

159 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Borrowed
Unfortunate incident
Regret
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Forgiveness
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