Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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world, there is a true argument that medicines and other
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products
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testing
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are tested
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on
animals
before
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for
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people. In my opinion,
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it is wrong
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animals
as
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for drugs and I would like to
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amount
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the amount
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of experimentation on
animals
for
development
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the development
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of medicines.
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, there
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cases where scientists conduct
a wild experiments
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on
animals
, especially on mice.
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most laboratories have a certain amount of
animals
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.
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, they often give illness to mice
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measure
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the effectiveness
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of the new drug.
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, it can lead to
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of several
animals
and most people consider that it should be stopped and appeal to respect species.
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, scientists should find alternative
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for their
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.
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, there are a few amount of reliable and available
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for testing drugs. It
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that
animals
like mikes or rats can be
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in
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in order to save
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human life and it can be justified.
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of the most experiments, many people can keep life by medicines which have been developed by testing on
animals
. Actually, I agree with
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the statement
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of ban
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about banning
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experimentations
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experimentation
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on
animals
, but I consider that sometimes we can use an evil method in order to save many lives. In conclusion, nowadays, there is
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an
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effective alternative way for testing drugs.
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, we need to use
animals
in the experimentation in order to estimate how it will
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on
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human
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respectively
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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