the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. summarize the information and make acomparison. write at least 150 words.

the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. summarize the information and make acomparison. 

write at least 150 words.
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This
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chart illustrates the various types of commodities, which were produced and exported by a certain country, and it indicates the value of money, which was obtained
as a result
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of the exportation of each one from 2015 to 2016. The table explains the ratio change in the value of each exported product
as a result
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of a comparison between 2016 and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the amount of funds obtained
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each category of exportation, in 2016, was greater than what was obtained, in 2015 except for gems and jewellery.
To begin
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, petroleum products and engineered goods were the main sources of income, as; each one brought in around 60 billion $. Even though their income, in 2016 was higher than in 2015, the difference was slight, particularly for petroleum products, which was, at 3%.
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to that,
although
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the second ratio change in the value of money between 2015 and 2016 was for engineered goods, at 8.5%, the least percentage variation was for agricultural products, at .81%.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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