Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

The characteristic
features
of the persons are decided during the infant stage by their genetic makeup, and there is no method to modify them. I partially agree with the statement as some of the traits are unchangeable,
while
some can be changed by
practice
. On the one hand, sometimes
due to
genetic
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some characteristics can not be modified. To make it more clear,
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are many
features
that the people inherit from their forefathers, and these are
also
passed to their upcoming
generations
.
In addition
, the reason
of
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that inheritance is that genes inside the
foetus
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body remain
same
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as
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their ancestors.
For example
,
according to
a survey, there are several skills like singing that are passed from
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generations
to
generations
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as their
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gene is active in all
generations
.
On the other hand
, most of the personal
features
can be changed by
practice
. To elaborate
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, as everyone knows '
practice
makes a man perfect' , so by focusing on a specific trait, people can improve them.
Furthermore
, nowadays, various personality development
centers
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are available in the market that can help
the
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individuals to modify their
personality
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according to
their internet. To exemplify,
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hand by
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more and more with it and
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right handy. In a nutshell, it is obvious that our
personality
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are predetermined before our birth but, in my opinion, I partially agree
with
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that there is no way to change them because
practice
on something is the best method to improve them,
although
some
features
are permanent as they are inherited from the ancestors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • predetermined
  • character traits
  • genetic influence
  • environmental factors
  • personality development
  • upbringing
  • foundation
  • evolution of traits
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