Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

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The characteristic
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of the persons are decided during the infant stage by their genetic makeup, and there is no method to modify them. I partially agree with the statement as some of the traits are unchangeable,
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some can be changed by
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. On the one hand, sometimes
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genetic
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some characteristics can not be modified. To make it more clear,
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are many
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that the people inherit from their forefathers, and these are
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passed to their upcoming
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, the reason
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that inheritance is that genes inside the
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body remain
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as
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their ancestors.
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a survey, there are several skills like singing that are passed from
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as their
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gene is active in all
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On the other hand
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, most of the personal
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can be changed by
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. To elaborate
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, as everyone knows '
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makes a man perfect' , so by focusing on a specific trait, people can improve them.
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, nowadays, various personality development
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are available in the market that can help
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individuals to modify their
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according to
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their internet. To exemplify,
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an article in "The Hindustan Times", most of the left handy people improve their habit of writing with
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hand by
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more and more with it and
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right handy. In a nutshell, it is obvious that our
personality
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are predetermined before our birth but, in my opinion, I partially agree
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that there is no way to change them because
practice
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on something is the best method to improve them,
although
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some
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are permanent as they are inherited from the ancestors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • predetermined
  • character traits
  • genetic influence
  • environmental factors
  • personality development
  • upbringing
  • foundation
  • evolution of traits
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