You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party

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Dear John, I am writing to apologize for my absence from your birthday party.

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, I have planned something for you for the coming weekend, which is the 21st of September, to make up for the missing party. Being your bestie for the past eight years, I owe you a big apology for not being present at your birthday bash. I know you were always excited about turning twenty-one, and your family had been planning for

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memorable day for a long time. I was all jacked up to be there by your side;

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, my aunt got a heart attack all of a sudden

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which I was unable to join the celebration.

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, being the only driver in my family, I had to make the necessary arrangements and take her to the hospital. She is in high spirits now and has been discharged from the hospital.

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catching up for the coming weekend, I grabbed the bomber jacket from Gucci, which has been on your list for a long time. I'll be handing it to you

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Saturday. Yours lovingly Harshveer

Submitted by harshveermangat141 on Sun Sep 10 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

185 words

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You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party

The most important aim of science ought to be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

some people believe the best way to tackle pollution is by paying tax others disagree. discuss both views and state your opinion

Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a healthy and long life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?