The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.

The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.
The bar chart illustrates how many people have visited museums in three different countries from 2000 to 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that, throughout the period, visiting from Edo of Tokyo was the highest,
while
at the end
it dropped to the
last
place.
On the other hand
, the visitors of National
Museum
of China rose significantly over time becoming the first in the final stage. Focusing
firstly
on the museums located in Asia, the popularity of Edo in Tokyo was over 12 in 200 and 2001.
Although
the numbers for
this
museum
fell steeply in 2003 to 6.3
million
visitors, it rose slightly
after
this
year
until reaching 10 in the
last
year
. Meanwhile,
in contrast
, the Chinese National
Museum
had rocketed from approximately 6
million
in the
year
2000 to more than 15
million
visitors in 2005, becoming the most populated historical gallery in
this
report. Regarding the American
Museum
, in 2000, 12
million
guests visited the MET
Museum
of New York.
However
, in the next
year
, it experienced a sharp decrease to half of
last
year
's number.
Thereafter
, it rose rapidly for the next four years, achieving the second-visited art library after China with slightly more than 14
million
.
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