the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
This
line chart depicts the number of people had visited Caribbean
Correct article usage
the Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017 by millions.
It is clear from the graph that the people choose to stay on the cruise for a long time.
Fix the agreement mistake
islands
According to
what is shown, the total of visitors in the firts
year Correct your spelling
first
is
one Wrong verb form
was
million
people and this
number started to grow to over 2.5 million
in 2015 and remained level until 2016 then
increased to 3.5 million
at the end
of the period.
In terms of who stayed on the island
and on the ships, there were 300 thousand stayed on the ships while
about who stayed on the island
around 700 thousand in 2010. The number increased for these steayed on the island
to 1.5 million
in 2013 then
remained steady from 2013 to 2017.Submitted by firasalfadda2 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
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