The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.

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The maps above illustrate the differences that Denham town has witnessed from 1986 to the present day. In general, the main changes are the removal of all farmlands and an increase in the residential houses number.

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, the town has witnessed a huge upgrade in the number of residential homes, and,

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, an upgrade to the primary school was necessary.

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, farmlands located on the east of the river were demolished in order to build more residences,

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, farmlands below the bridge and east of the primary school were demolished in order to enlarge the primary school

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to build more residences.

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, the size of the gardens was reduced to accommodate more residential buildings in the area.

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, the two shops next to the post office were demolished to build more houses. The large house was expanded and transformed into a retirement home.

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, the bridge and post office were untouched since 1986.

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The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.

Increasingly, many young people are deciding to work or study in other countries. What are the causes of this phenomenon? Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

In your opinion, what has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years?

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recent technological development means we can stay in touch with people no matter where they are in the world 1. why is it important to keep in touch with people? 2. is face to face interaction more important than communicating online?