the best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is an idea that the best
way
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to figure out adverse environmental impacts is to increase the cost of
fuel
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for cars and other vehicles. In my view, I claimed that there are a bundle of solutions that can
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that problem thoroughly,
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disagree with the statement that raising the
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of
fuel
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is the best
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to reduce damage to
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. The rise in
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of
fuel
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a decline
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the use of vehicles, but the cons dominate its pros.
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with,
fuel
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links mightily with the economy of a country. Oil and gas
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almost things, from
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consumer spending to the
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of good, if we cannot control it ideally, we can struggle in an economic depression, which leads to
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drop in
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value,
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the
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unemployment rate, and
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put
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stress on financial management in every household, mainly be the reason that
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criminal rate. Dubai set a perfect example for
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issue, when the oil
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there rocketed in
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long term, the society spread into two sides: slums and skyscrapers right next to each other,
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the quality of life between both was drastically divided like chalk and cheese.
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we are exploring more about the effects between prices and
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diesels
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, agree that rising
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oil prices do not always lead to depression;
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, there is a spotlight that the improvement of engine day by day
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also
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reducing environmental contamination gradually.
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one of the best
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way
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to wipe out nature, or world pollution,
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me. For centuries, doctors in many fields worked on different kinds of projects to find out about new types of engines or new sources of energy. As an undeniable example
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, trains in the beginning
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by
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coal, and years later,
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now, we use electricity
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. In conclusion,
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increasing the
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of fossil fuels can acceptably be a
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to reduce stress on nature, I do not believe that it outweighs the other
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out.
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