Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words
The map shows, the area of Brandfield where
city
planners have finalized to construction of a shopping mall in the proposed sites S1 and S2.
To summarize, the new shopping wall was built in the approached area in the city
of Brandfield.
The Brandfield have a huge surrounding, The City
centre
was constructed in the middle of the city
, and it was easily accessible as it has road and railway facilities from NorthEast to SouthEast and NorthWest and SouthEast respectively. However
, from the City
centre
, the public transport on the highway used to travel near the Golf course and park, then
the same way to travel to the Housing Estate. Though,
the Remove the comma
apply
City
centre
is located hot of the city
, it was constructed in the middle of the river, therefore
river water flows from SouthWest to NorthEast. Also
, an industrial estate located near the road as well as
railway facilities in the SouthEast corner of the City
centre
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