Some people believe that teenagers should always follow the example of the older people. Others believe that teenagers should question what older people say. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals consider that
young
generation could Correct article usage
the young
put
their steps on the past Verb problem
take
nation
Change noun form
nation's
life
route. But, others think that teenager
have to ask a lot of questions about what elderly people say. In Fix the agreement mistake
teenagers
this
essay, I will discuss both views and support them with examples and finally
I will give my own opinion.
Add a comma
,finally
Firstly
, aged folks tend to transfer their experience to the young people because,
they spent Remove the comma
apply
big
part of their Add an article
a big
life
on
the world. Change preposition
in
Thus
, they have experienced lots of things, moreover
they found and solved too many errors. In that Add a comma
,moreover
way
,not only do they can use their life
knowledge but they also
don't need to find solution
for their problems because previous folks found Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
best
ways for them. Correct article usage
the best
For instance
, Albert Aniston who was the
famous science professor in Germany in 1920, Correct article usage
a
he
spent 35 years to find a Correct pronoun usage
apply
way
to cultivate the
light speed Correct article usage
apply
and
now, Correct word choice
apply
teenager
use his theory at schools and they don't judge Fix the agreement mistake
teenagers
this
data too
, so they know that hole the information is correct.
Rephrase
apply
On the other hand
, other
believe that young nations should investigate Fix the agreement mistake
others
about
previous Change preposition
apply
generation
knowledge, so in Fix the agreement mistake
generations
this
century, regarding recent technology teenager's
data are higher than Change noun form
teenagers'
older
societies, Change preposition
in older
therefore
, their attitude has changed. For example
, the recent essay about the percentage of individuals who believe Change preposition
in any
any
Change preposition
in any
Fix the agreement mistake
religion
religions
has shown Fix the agreement mistake
religion
Correct article usage
a sharp
sharp
decrease in Norway in 2020, Correct article usage
a sharp
furthermore
, researchers consider that one of the major Capitalize word
Furthermore
Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
reason
for Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
this
decline is that younger societies never accept older Change noun form
people's
people
data without investigating.
In conclusion, Change noun form
people's
utilize
the elderly person's experience and knowledge is so valuable like science, but about other issues like Wrong verb form
utilising
religions
they tend to invest and Add a comma
,religions
then
may accept their ideas. In that way
, I believe that new
generation Correct article usage
the new
have
to find their own Change the verb form
has
life
way
without attention to aged
person's attitude.Correct article usage
the aged
Submitted by mehrdad.salahi2003 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!