Some individuals consider that
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generation could
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their steps on the past
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life
route. But, others think that
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have to ask a lot of questions about what elderly people say. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views and support them with examples and
I will give my own opinion.
Firstly
, aged folks tend to transfer their experience to the young people because
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they spent
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part of their
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the world.
Thus
, they have experienced lots of things,
they found and solved too many errors. In that
way
,not only do they can use their
life
knowledge but they
also
don't need to find
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for their problems because previous folks found
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ways for them.
For instance
, Albert Aniston who was
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famous science professor in Germany in 1920,
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spent 35 years to find a
way
to cultivate
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light speed
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now,
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use his theory at schools and they don't judge
this
data
, so they know that hole the information is correct.
On the other hand
,
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believe that young nations should investigate
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previous
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knowledge, so in
this
century, regarding recent technology
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data are higher than
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societies,
therefore
, their attitude has changed.
For example
, the recent essay about the percentage of individuals who believe
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has shown
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decrease in Norway in 2020,
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, researchers consider that one of the major
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for
this
decline is that younger societies never accept older
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data without investigating.
In conclusion,
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the elderly person's experience and knowledge is so valuable like science, but about other issues like
they tend to invest and
then
may accept their ideas. In that
way
, I believe that
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generation
haveChange the verb form
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to find their own
life
way
without attention to
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person's attitude.