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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how much
waste
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 three companies(
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company
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 A,
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company
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B
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 and
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company
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C
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) made between 2000 and 2015.
Unit
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 of measure of
waste
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 is
tonnes
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.
Overall
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 the
waste
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 produced by
company
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B
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 and
company
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C
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show
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 a decreased trend from 2000 to 2015
whereas
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 that made
from
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by
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company
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 A
is
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increased in the considered period. In 2000,
Company
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 A
produces
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produced
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 the highest amount of
waste
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of
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about 12
tonnes
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 and
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company
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C
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 made the lowest quantity of
wate
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waste
 of approximately 4
tonnes
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. Later the
waste
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generation
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 of
company
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 A decreased to 5
tonnes
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 in 2015
whereas
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company
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C
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's
waste
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generation
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 increased to 10
tonnes
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 in 2015.
Company
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B
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's highest amount of
waste
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generation
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is
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at
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in
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 2005
of
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about 10
tonnes
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 .After that year the
waste
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generation
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 decreased and in the year
2015
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,2015
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Company
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B
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 produced the least amount of
waste
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 compared to
Company
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 A and
Company
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B
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, b, c, tonnes, generation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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