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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
#amounts #waste #three #companies #period #years #information #features #comparisons
The line graph illustrates how much
waste
 three companies(
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Company
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company
 A,
company
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Company
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B
 and
company
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Company
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C
) made between 2000 and 2015.
Unit
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The unit
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 of measure of
waste
 is
tonnes
.
Overall
 the
waste
 produced by
company
B
 and
company
C
show
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 a decreased trend from 2000 to 2015
whereas
 that made
from
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by
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company
 A
is
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apply
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increased in the considered period. In 2000,
Company
 A
produces
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produced
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 the highest amount of
waste
of
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apply
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about 12
tonnes
 and
company
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Company
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C
 made the lowest quantity of
wate
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waste
 of approximately 4
tonnes
. Later the
waste
generation
 of
company
 A decreased to 5
tonnes
 in 2015
whereas
company
C
's
waste
generation
 increased to 10
tonnes
 in 2015.
Company
B
's highest amount of
waste
generation
is
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was
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at
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in
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 2005
of
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apply
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about 10
tonnes
 .After that year the
waste
generation
 decreased and in the year
2015
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,2015
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Company
B
 produced the least amount of
waste
 compared to
Company
 A and
Company
B
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, b, c, tonnes, generation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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