Is it better to buy few expensive clothes , rather tahn lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Adapting to a particular lifestyle depends on the individual's way of life.
However
, when it comes to clothing, there are two main ways
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buying them, one being buying clothes to be more
sustinable
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sustainable
or to invest their money in a valuable piece. I completely disagree
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the idea of spending a copious amount of money on
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expensive
clothes. Clothing is considered to be vital in everyday life and it represents the individual's confidence and
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perspective.
As a result
, it has
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to the development of various styles and designs in the clothing industry , eventually, leading to the production of designer brands.
Although
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expensive pieces have a longer
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life, individuals do not recommend
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because they want to have different
style
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styles
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and pieces that they mix and match during various weather and climate changes throughout the year.
For example
, if a person buys a costly winter jacket for several hundred dollars from Gucci, they will be able to use it only during winter despite spending so much and store
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the wardrobe during other seasons.
Likewise
, people nowadays are leaning more towards
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lifestyle, thereby, buying cheap apparel. Eventually,
this
has encouraged the opening of various thrift stores all around the world, where they can purchase preowned items at a
cost efficient
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rate. Not only price,but, it will enable people to wear different kinds of dresses depending on the season much cheaper .
For instance
,
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used to
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to thrift stores and Walmart on a regular basis during my college days to buy clothes. As there was always a budget,
i
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preferred buying there because
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can
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get many items and
dress
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dresses
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for a very low price. In conclusion, I believe,
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purchased at a more affordable price will provide us with
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variety and it will
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us to be environmentally conscious rather than buying
less
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fewer
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outfits from expensive designers.
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