The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart illustrates the illiteracy
rates in six different regions i.e. developed countries
, Latin America, East Asia
, sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states and South Asia
in the last
year. The information in the bar chart is specified by gender i.e. males
and females
.
To begin
with, the illiteracy
rate
in south
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South
Asia
is at its peak which is around 35% for males
and 55% for females
. On the other hand
, developed countries
have the least illiteracy
rate
which is hardly 1% males
and 2% females
.
Furthermore
, the illiteracy
rate
of females
in all six regions is higher than the illiteracy
rate
of males
. The difference between the illiteracy
rate
of females
and males
is extremely high in South Asia
, Arab countries
and sub-Saharan Africa which is between 45% to 55%. This
difference is also
high in East Asia
but the overall
illiteracy
rate
is comparatively low. But in Latin America and Developed countries
, the overall
illiteracy
rate
and the difference between both genders is quite low.Submitted by khannaughty26 on
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