The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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bar chart illustrates the
illiteracy
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rates in six different regions i.e. developed
countries
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, Latin America, East
Asia
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, sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states and South
Asia
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in the
last
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year. The information in the bar chart is specified by gender i.e.
males
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and
females
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.
To begin
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with, the
illiteracy
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rate
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in
south
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South
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Asia
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is at its peak which is around 35% for
males
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and 55% for
females
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.
On the other hand
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, developed
countries
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have the least
illiteracy
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rate
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which is hardly 1%
males
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and 2%
females
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.
Furthermore
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, the
illiteracy
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rate
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of
females
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in all six regions is higher than the
illiteracy
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rate
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of
males
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. The difference between the
illiteracy
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rate
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of
females
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and
males
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is extremely high in South
Asia
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, Arab
countries
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and sub-Saharan Africa which is between 45% to 55%.
This
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difference is
also
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high in East
Asia
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but the
overall
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illiteracy
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rate
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is comparatively low. But in Latin America and Developed
countries
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, the
overall
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illiteracy
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rate
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and the difference between both genders is quite low.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, countries, asia, males, females, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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