The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart illustrates the
illiteracy
rates in six different regions i.e. developed
countries
, Latin America, East
Asia
, sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states and South
Asia
in the
last
year. The information in the bar chart is specified by gender i.e.
males
and
females
.
To begin
with, the
illiteracy
rate
in
south
Capitalize word
South
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Asia
is at its peak which is around 35% for
males
and 55% for
females
.
On the other hand
, developed
countries
have the least
illiteracy
rate
which is hardly 1%
males
and 2%
females
.
Furthermore
, the
illiteracy
rate
of
females
in all six regions is higher than the
illiteracy
rate
of
males
. The difference between the
illiteracy
rate
of
females
and
males
is extremely high in South
Asia
, Arab
countries
and sub-Saharan Africa which is between 45% to 55%.
This
difference is
also
high in East
Asia
but the
overall
illiteracy
rate
is comparatively low. But in Latin America and Developed
countries
, the
overall
illiteracy
rate
and the difference between both genders is quite low.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, countries, asia, males, females, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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