The diagram below gives information about the recycling of glass and plastic containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram compares the stages of recycling between
plastic
and glass
. Overall
, it is evident that both of them go through 8 stages beginning with collection and ending with new products.
To begin
, there are some similarities in the process of glass
and plastic
. Starting with the first two steps of collection and transporting to recycling
centre, transporting Add an article
a recycling
the recycling
trucks
collection takes five to ten days Change the noun form
truck
while
it takes 3 to 8 weeks for time usage, both go through a washing step, and in the reshaping and melting stage both done
by different machines.
Add a missing verb
are done
On the other hand
, there are several differences, the process of plastic
is much longer and takes more time to recycle than glass
. However
, the reshaping and melting steps in glass
are done by two separate machines while
in plastic
done by the same machine, then
in the stage of sorting, Capitalize word
Then
glass
is sorted out by color while
in plastic
is sorted out by thickness and quality. In addition
, in
Change preposition
apply
plastic
it
is usually shredded compared to Correct pronoun usage
apply
glass
it is crushed.Submitted by leilaalrashidi on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, glass with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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