The diagram below gives information about the recycling of glass and plastic containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below gives information about the recycling of glass and plastic containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram compares the stages of recycling between
plastic
and
glass
.
Overall
, it is evident that both of them go through 8 stages beginning with collection and ending with new products.
To begin
, there are some similarities in the process of
glass
and
plastic
. Starting with the first two steps of collection and transporting to
recycling
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a recycling
the recycling
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centre, transporting
trucks
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truck
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collection takes five to ten days
while
it takes 3 to 8 weeks for time usage, both go through a washing step, and in the reshaping and melting stage both
done
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are done
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by different machines.
On the other hand
, there are several differences, the process of
plastic
is much longer and takes more time to recycle than
glass
.
However
, the reshaping and melting steps in
glass
are done by two separate machines
while
in
plastic
done by the same machine,
then
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Then
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in the stage of sorting,
glass
is sorted out by color
while
in
plastic
is sorted out by thickness and quality.
In addition
,
in
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apply
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plastic
it
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apply
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is usually shredded compared to
glass
it is crushed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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