Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environment problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Experts throughout both the developing and developed

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have debated whether the most critical environmental problem is the

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of some endangered

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of plant and animal kingdom or whether there are other issues which are more severe. Personally, I strongly advocate the

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view.

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will be examined in

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essay using examples to demonstrate points and prove arguments. On the one hand, there is ample and strong evidence that losing some plants and

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has an extremely negative effect, especially on the balance of an ecosystem which will be destroyed. As the first point, some

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will no longer have a proper diet and will consume other types of

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. An extensive study from the University of Cambridge,

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, illustrated that the grey wolves in North America tend to hunt larger

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than they used to after the permanent loss of local

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in northern

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of the United States.

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results in the attack of those wolves

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domestic cattle

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as cows and goats, leading to the loss of villages’ properties. Another point which should be taken into consideration is that losing some

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in the

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chain will lead to a domino effect on the predators as well. The central reason behind

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is that some

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could eat only one certain type of

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and could not survive without it.

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, the population of blue-tailed shrimp in the Pacific Ocean started to be reduced

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the lack of red algae. In the meantime, rock snappers, big fish whose

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is shrimp,

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have a declining number.

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,

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there is

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downside

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the

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of

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,

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impact of other problems might be more severe significantly cannot be denied. Perhaps the most important one is global warming, which is

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well-known global issue. The results of it could be in multiples ways,

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, the rise of global

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which has a dramatic effect on the

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population. A clear illustration is that there are almost 100 thousand people died from heat stroke, resulting from increased

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, in 2022 which is a serious problem.

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, the rise in sea level is undeniable to be another serious problem. It is predicted to be increased by 5

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annually from the melting of icebergs in the poles.

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, a famous tourist-attracting island, and numerous islands are predicted to sink under the

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surface in decades. Consistent with

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line of thinking is that those problems are more severe and have

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impact on the

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including the

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of some

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as well. Some bees in Japan

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no longer

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the hotter

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there, leading to the disappearance of

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flower in the Southern area

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loss of pollination.

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from the arguments and examples given, I firmly believe that global warming would be more critical compared to

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of those

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as it will lead to

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as well. The impact

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has created that noticeable change

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and

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the ways of living. It is predicted that the

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will increase

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2 degrees per year.

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, everyone should follow the rules and save the environment together for

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sustainable

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in the future.