some people think that more money should be spend on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money. and provide your own opinion.
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people
regarding funding endangered animals . Some Use synonyms
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believe that there should be a grant for protection, Use synonyms
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as a waste of financial resources. I personally agree with the investment and in the following, I will delineate my view.
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To begin
, it is crucial to invest in securing animals that are endangered of extinction since Linking Words
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phenomenon has detrimental effects on biodiversity and the planet. When a rare animal disappears, its predators and its prey are influenced at first as the food for its predators becomes rare, Linking Words
while
its prey becomes widespread in the habitat. Linking Words
For example
, you can only see a Persian lion in the zoo as its wild one does not live in the Iranian jungle anymore. Linking Words
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, the number of foxes, which are its main food, has increased Linking Words
therefore
these foxes are hunting too many farming animals.
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think that there are other serious issues, for investment. Use synonyms
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rate too. I mean that some of these living creatures can be used as a source of nutrients for humans or they can protect farming from natural damages like insects. Linking Words
For example
, some birds like bats eat insects. Linking Words
Consequently
, if bats disappear, there would be a huge number of insects around the world as they may destroy agriculture or spread perilous diseases like Malaria.
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