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Many students find it is harder to study at university or college compared to when they were in grade school. Why is this? What are some possible solutions for this problem?

#students #study #university #college #grade #school
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 there is a whole different system for teaching and many different ways to
study
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 many students find it so hard in college or university. In grade school it is easier for kids to learn and get the information because teachers in school are teach, You can count on them to get knowledge and you just supposed to focus and do your homework,
While
 in college they guide you, Tell you what to do and helps you if there is a need. In the academy it all depends on self-
study
 so you should focus and pay attention
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 yourself
otherwise
 you are going to fail.
That is
 why a lot of students find it so hard to consider
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 university or college. As an effect, Some students find solutions to
this
 problem: First of
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 you should make a
study
 plan . The second is that you should join a
study
 group, They will help you to improve your knowledge.
Thus
,
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 of your hard
study
 that will allow you to get better grades in your academic career.
To sum up
, Based on what has been discussed above it seems to me that
this
 problem has many different solutions but ignoring these solutions and not counting on yourself may lead to some drawbacks in your studies and even in your life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Self-directed learning
  • Time management
  • Critical thinking
  • Independent study
  • Complexity
  • Academic support
  • Study skills
  • Workshops
  • Orientation programs
  • Financial aid
  • Work-life balance
  • Tutoring services
  • Self-discipline
  • Depth of understanding
  • Higher education
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