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Some people think tv is good for us, while others argue that tv has many disadvantages. Discuss both the views

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With the advancement of technology, there are several ways to consume entertainment, like the use of social media, surfing online and most
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television
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, which is the oldest form to have fun. But recently
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television
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 has become a point of debate
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 the consumption of
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 is good or bad.
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 essay will discuss both views and my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with the first notion, there are murals of things to be shared.
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, despite the increase of social media over different platforms,
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 is still the most preferable way to have pleasure because it relaxes the mind of an individual.
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, a survey of the Times of India suggests that around 80% of the audience choose to watch
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 rather than the other way of amusement.
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, people can watch
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 and learn about what is going on in the country and
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the younger audience,
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can do daily shopping by watching the
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 on the screen.
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,
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 can be helpful in
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 part of our lives.
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, in today's time, most
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young toddlers are just attached to the
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 and
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 it can have various side-effects like weakened eyesight and many more .
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, I want 35% of children to have spectacles at an early stage of their lives.
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, children can become very lazy and furious because they are not comfortable doing their jobs on time.
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, children just waste time by watching
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 which even has an adverse effect on the human body.
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, they do not learn any value by watching it.
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 , there are numerous drawbacks of watching
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, but I strongly believe that, by watching
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, a person can be led from their busy schedule and can have fun.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • source of entertainment
  • relaxation
  • means of information
  • education
  • cultural awareness
  • negative influence
  • addiction
  • moderation
  • TV programs
  • documentaries
  • news
  • reality shows
  • soap operas
  • commercials
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