The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture shows the steps involved in making recycled
plastic
bottles and how
plastic
products are made. There are 9 stages in the diagram, from where the
plastic
stuff comes from, to the types of end things     
The first step is
that the
plastic
bottles are taken from trash cans, and
then
they are  
being
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trucked out to the sorting centre. Once sufficient bottles have been sorted out,  they are 
then
compressed into blocks and put into a crushing machine. After the crushing stage,
plastic
pieces are washed in the water to be cleaned. The
molded
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pellets are filtered through special equipment, which reduces their size    In order to make end products these tiny pellets are heated. 
Next,
the
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certain amount of
plastic
pieces are formed
to
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into
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raw materials. Having been reformed,
this
product
are
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delivered to
the
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shops, schools etc. At
this
,point we can use the end stage of recycling.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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