The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to school in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The bar graph depicts the figure for trips made by children in one country to travel from school using different modes of transport between 1990 and 2010. It is evident that
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there are five types of means of transport. Looking from an
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perspective, it is readily apparent that In 1990 walking was used for most travel,
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car passenger was the least figure witnessed. Looking at the details of the bar graph, we can see that in 1990 people were more used to travelling
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walking (13 million per year),
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, car passenger was the least number of travel 5%.The figure for people who travelled by bus was 7%
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, in 2010 it decreased by about 5%. As we can see the total of people travelling by cycling was almost just above 6%,
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as compared to 2010 it collapsed to 2%. The walking and bus was witnessed by nearly 6%,
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in 2010 it fell by about 3% approximately
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