The bar chart below show number of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the gormez straits from 2006 to 2008

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illustrate

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the three mammals

population

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in the

gormez

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straits between 2006 to 2018.

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, the sea animal

population

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increased

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the year and some small fluctuations

happed

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in between. As can be seen

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, in 2006

whales

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and dolphin

population

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was

slight

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grew

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to 17 between 2010 are significantly increased

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to 27 to 22 and

seals

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the seals

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population

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decreased

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to 25. In the year,

gromez

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Gomez

straits

acquits

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animal

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population

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gre in 2018

seals

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and dolphins volume

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35 to 44 and

whale

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whales

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lift

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the dolphin

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increased

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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3
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

102 words

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The bar chart below show number of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the gormez straits from 2006 to 2008

Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree

Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. "Do you think" the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?

Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to an audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?