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The bar chart below show number of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the gormez straits from 2006 to 2008

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 bar graph
illustrate
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illustrates
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 the three mammals
population
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 in the
gormez
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Gormez
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 straits between 2006 to 2018.
Overall
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, the sea animal
population
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 increased
through out
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throughout
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 the year and some small fluctuations
happed
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happened
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 in between. As can be seen
that
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apply
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, in 2006
whales
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whale
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 and dolphin
population
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 was
slight
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slightly
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 grew
25
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from 25
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 to 17 between 2010 are significantly increased
up
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apply
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to 27 to 22 and
seals
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the seals
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population
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 decreased
44
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 to 25. In the year,
gromez
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Gomez
 straits
acquits
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acquired
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animal
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an animal
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population
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 gre in 2018
seals
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Seals
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 and dolphins volume
high
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ranged from
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 35 to 44 and
whale
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whales
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lift
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lifted
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 up
22
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from 22
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 to 25.
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However
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,However
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 the dolphin
population
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was
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apply
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increased
32
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from 32
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 to 52

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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