The bar chart below show number of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the gormez straits from 2006 to 2008
This
bar graph illustrate
the three mammals Change the verb form
illustrates
population
in the gormez
straits between 2006 to 2018.
Change the capitalization
Gormez
Overall
, the sea animal population
increased through out
the year and some small fluctuations Correct your spelling
throughout
happed
in between.
As can be seenVerb problem
happened
that
, in 2006 Correct word choice
apply
whales
and dolphin Fix the agreement mistake
whale
population
was slight
grew Change the word
slightly
25
to 17 between 2010 are significantly increased Change preposition
from 25
up
to 27 to 22 and Change preposition
apply
seals
Correct article usage
the seals
population
decreased 44
to 25.
In the year, Change preposition
from 44
gromez
straits Correct your spelling
Gomez
acquits
Verb problem
acquired
animal
Correct article usage
an animal
population
gre in 2018 seals
and dolphins volume Capitalize word
Seals
high
35 to 44 and Correct word choice
ranged from
whale
Fix the agreement mistake
whales
lift
up Wrong verb form
lifted
22
to 25. Change preposition
from 22
However
the dolphin Add a comma
,However
population
was
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
32
to 52Change preposition
from 32
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