Nowadays in many countries people are following the latest fashion, hairstyles and clothing. Why are they influenced by fashion?  Is it a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays fashionable items and styles including clothing, hairstyles and accessories are becoming so popular in some
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. In
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essay, I will discuss
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as a reason why
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are following the latest trend and I think
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is a negative development because it might not be suitable for some traditional
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and might be dangerous for the wearer in terms of harassment. First of all, the
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can play a significant role in influencing
fashion
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to
people
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who consume them because when
people
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watch movies, dramas, TV programmes or even sports, they tend to imitate
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such
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as hairstyles, clothing and accessories from their favourite stars or celebrities.
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the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University, it is revealed that approximately 80% of Thai
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follow the latest trend in
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from their famous Thai dramas which were on air at that time.
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means that all clothing and accessory items on the market will be related to the
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from those TV programs or movies. The more individuals consume and follow
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, the more they become influenced by the latest fashions.
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, I think
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is a negative development for
people
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who are following the
fashion
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because they will be exposed to Western
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which is too much opens their skin to the public. By
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I mean, that in some
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the appearance of skin to the public is forbidden and not an appropriate thing to do, for it might be dangerous or cause problems for the fashionable
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themselves.
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,
people
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usually dress appropriately in India, but in the latest news reported by BBC News, there was a crucial increase in crime related to
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clothing
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as harassment and sexual abuse. If
people
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dress nicely and suitably for the venue or event that they are going to, they will have compliments and respect from
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around them. In conclusion,
fashion
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plays a significant role in many
countries
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people
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tend to copy the latest
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they watched from TV programmes,
fashion
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shows, movies and dramas
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in some
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, it is a negative point because it could cause problems for the
people
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who are wearing latest
fashion
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which is against the belief or tradition of their
countries
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also
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it might cause them to commit to crime or being harassed victims.
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