The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meet in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meet in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The given table illustrates the usage of a variety of meat, fish included, in Europa over the given period time from 1979 to 2004.
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, amount of chicken consumers
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gone up
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indicators of consumption of beef have dramatically decreased. It can be seen that, in 1979, people consumed beef more than other kinds which was over 200
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per person weekly.
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, after 1989 there was a sharp fall that continued till 2004 and the final numbers were roughly 120
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per week.
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, the same is true for lamb.
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weekly
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were 150 in consuming lamb, numbers lightly declined. In 2004 it was about 70
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. Throughout years the was a fluctuating increase in chicken depletion. In the beginning weekly consumption of chicken was even lower than 150
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which was the lowest indicator.
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, after 1984s it started growing and in 2004 it rocketed to 250
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per person weekly. It was the most significant increase.
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, the was no remarkable decrease or increase in fish consumption from 1070 to 2004. In 2004 only 50
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of fish was consumed by people weekly.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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