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in many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities,so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is no doubt that urban and rural
communites
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communities
 should work together in all countries
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 if we hope for a better future.
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 some
people
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 may see that countryside depopulation as a positive development, others argue that it could be detrimental to the whole structure of
socities
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society
. In
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 with, rural
people
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 moving to cities can lead to a decrease in food production and potential aggravation of problems
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 as famine and drought in some developing countries.
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 dwindling numbers of the human
work force
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 in the
country side
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countryside
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, which
lead
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leads
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 to negative impacts on agriculture and the
possibilty
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possibility
 of
destruction
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 of a lot of green spaces and fields that are essential in keeping the environment safe.
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, the prices of fresh
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 would go up significantly, if the situation was allowed to continue uncontrolablely.
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, the unstoppable urban sprawl has many other serious implications
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 as overcrowding and traffic congestion.
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,
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 will lead to a decline in job prospects and an increase in housing
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problems
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, living in cities comes with more economic
burden
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 like more taxes and more costly daily requirements,
on the other hand
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 farmers in rural areas can be
self sufficent
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self-sufficient
. If
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 emigration continued,
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 would have dangerous
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afflictions
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 on countries as a whole. In conclusion, because
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 leaving rural areas
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 decrease in food production and overcrowding, I believe that
people
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 should consider
stay
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 in the countryside.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rural-to-urban migration
  • population shift
  • positive impact
  • negative impact
  • urbanization
  • job opportunities
  • access to education
  • access to healthcare
  • urban infrastructure
  • rural traditions
  • cultural heritage
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