in many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities,so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is no doubt that urban and rural

communites

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communities

should work together in all countries

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if we hope for a better future.

While

some

people

may see that countryside depopulation as a positive development, others argue that it could be detrimental to the whole structure of

socities

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society

. In

this

essay, I will explain why I agree with the latter view.

To begin

with, rural

people

moving to cities can lead to a decrease in food production and potential aggravation of problems

such

as famine and drought in some developing countries.

This

is because

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dwindling numbers of the human

work force

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in the

country side

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, which

lead

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to negative impacts on agriculture and the

possibilty

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possibility

of

destruction

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of a lot of green spaces and fields that are essential in keeping the environment safe.

Also

, the prices of fresh

produces

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would go up significantly, if the situation was allowed to continue uncontrolablely.

Furthermore

, the unstoppable urban sprawl has many other serious implications

such

as overcrowding and traffic congestion.

As a consequence

,

this

will lead to a decline in job prospects and an increase in housing

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problems

.

In addition

, living in cities comes with more economic

burden

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like more taxes and more costly daily requirements,

on the other hand

farmers in rural areas can be

self sufficent

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self-sufficient

. If

people

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emigration continued,

this

would have dangerous

afflications

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afflictions

applications

on countries as a whole. In conclusion, because

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negative consequences

for

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leaving rural areas

such

decrease in food production and overcrowding, I believe that

people

should consider

stay

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in the countryside.