The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development.

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There is a plan illustrated with two maps and shows how the shopping mall: “Southside” is currently structured, and how it will look after

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upgrades are implemented in the future.

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, the building will construct new areas mainly used to attract new costumers interested in fashion.

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, a demolition is planned on those spaces designed specifically for activities and leisure time. Currently, the shopping centre is divided into two areas: Indoors, were we can find the following areas: Cafe, Play Area, Noodle Shop, Toilets, Supermarket, Department Store - which represents a third of the total space of the mall - and Cinemas. As for the outside space, it has a Gold Course, a Parking Lot and a Fitness Centre.

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the proposal, only the supermarket, toilet facilities and department store will remain intact. The most radical change will be the in the east side of the outdoor section, where the gold course and park will be demolish in order to give room for an extension of the shopping mall.

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the supermarket will stay in the future’s structure, it won’t be in the spot. Based on the design, it will be placed in the new extension and its previous space will be used to build fashion boutiques

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development.

Some people say that drug companies have a responsibility to spend money on researching medicines that will help people in poorer countries. Others say the main responsibility of drug companies is to make money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Should students be allowed to choose which classes they take, or should they be required to take the same classes as everyone else? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each approach to education?

Some people think that all unviersity students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People should follow the customs and traditions when they start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?