The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development.

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There is a plan illustrated with two maps and shows how the shopping mall: “Southside” is currently structured, and how it will look after

further

upgrades are implemented in the future.

Overall

, the building will construct new areas mainly used to attract new costumers interested in fashion.

However

, a demolition is planned on those spaces designed specifically for activities and leisure time. Currently, the shopping centre is divided into two areas: Indoors, were we can find the following areas: Cafe, Play Area, Noodle Shop, Toilets, Supermarket, Department Store - which represents a third of the total space of the mall - and Cinemas. As for the outside space, it has a Gold Course, a Parking Lot and a Fitness Centre.

According to

the proposal, only the supermarket, toilet facilities and department store will remain intact. The most radical change will be the in the east side of the outdoor section, where the gold course and park will be demolish in order to give room for an extension of the shopping mall.

Although

the supermarket will stay in the future’s structure, it won’t be in the spot. Based on the design, it will be placed in the new extension and its previous space will be used to build fashion boutiques

instead

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The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development.

creative artists should always be given the freedom express their own ideas (in word, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. there should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Recent years, the number of crime committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. discuss this issues. give reasons and suggest some solutions.

In many countries, governments like to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think the government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people believe that public celebrations like national days and festivals are a waste of money. They are of the opinion that people should spend money on more important things. Do you agree or disagree? Support your arguments with examples from your own experience.

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum overweight the disadvantages??