The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development.

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There is a plan illustrated with two maps and shows how the shopping mall: “Southside” is currently structured, and how it will look after

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upgrades are implemented in the future.

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, the building will construct new areas mainly used to attract new costumers interested in fashion.

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, a demolition is planned on those spaces designed specifically for activities and leisure time. Currently, the shopping centre is divided into two areas: Indoors, were we can find the following areas: Cafe, Play Area, Noodle Shop, Toilets, Supermarket, Department Store - which represents a third of the total space of the mall - and Cinemas. As for the outside space, it has a Gold Course, a Parking Lot and a Fitness Centre.

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the proposal, only the supermarket, toilet facilities and department store will remain intact. The most radical change will be the in the east side of the outdoor section, where the gold course and park will be demolish in order to give room for an extension of the shopping mall.

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the supermarket will stay in the future’s structure, it won’t be in the spot. Based on the design, it will be placed in the new extension and its previous space will be used to build fashion boutiques

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The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development.

Fossil fuels are the main source of energy in many countries. Using of other sources like solar power are encouraged.

You had dinner with a family friend. Write a letter to your friend to say What you liked about the dinner Your feelings about their family Invite your friend and their family to your place

Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweight the disadvantage?