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In many countries tradition of family having meals together is disappearing. WHy is this happening? what will be the effect of it on the family and society?

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Spending Quality
time
 with family
members
 helps individuals to share their problems.
However
, nowadays in many countries, individuals do not invest
time
 with their families especially when they are having their meals together. It's utterly diminishing and
this
 essay will discuss the reason behind
this
 including it will point out some consequences on the community and family. There are many reasons but I want to emphasise one main reason.
Due to
 the busy schedule of work, every family member has their own obligations and responsibility towards their work. So
due to
 that reason, every member of the family has their own timetable to perform their tasks.
This
 obviously obstructs the family
members
 from having their meal together. As family
members
 do not get
time
 to have dinner together. It will introduce many repercussions for society
as well as
 families. There would be a
chance
 of family disputes
due to
 less understanding.
For instance
, if families do not have
time
 to have a meal together, they will not get a
chance
 to share the problems of day-to-day life
due to
 which there is a high
chance
 of having family disagreements.
This
 problem indirectly affects society because every community is built with different family
members
. Family
members
 who can not solve their own family matters
then
 how individual can solve the major social issues.
To conclude
, I personally believe that
due to
 the different
time tables
Correct your spelling
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 of family
members
, they do not get the
chance
 to have their dinner together. It results in less bonding between the family
members
 which has many consequences towards society
as well as
 family
members
.
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