Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • give details of how and your friends or family use the centre • explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community • describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am John Reyyes, one of the members of the local community, writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with your plan to close the sports and leisure

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that will have negative effects on us. My family and I have been using the

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since we moved to

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area.

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, my wife has taken up a yoga course there and

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sport from the sports

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has had a positive impact on our lives.

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, my children have been working out there in the past year.

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, they are away from getting addicted to the drugs.

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is vitally important for the local community here, and it has brought many benefits with it. youths are having healthy lives

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the variety of courses that are being held there. So,

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centre

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is cooperating with their schools to make it easier to develop their skills and express themselves in

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society. If

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centre

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were closed in order to save money, the local community would face many problems that would be out of the local council's budget to deal with them.

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, in

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centre

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women who are taking care of their children, some courses for upbringing a child and the best ways to behave children are taught. I am looking forward to your reply in order to change your mind about saving

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centre

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instead

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of closing it to save money . Yours faithfully, John Reyyes

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

247 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

leisure centre
foster social bonds
physical health
mental well-being
constructive activities
accessible
exercise
community spirit
public service
anti-social behavior
cost-saving measures
vital role
recreation
negative impact
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